World Canvas

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    Once again drag to new tab to view full size. This one is scrunched.
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    My my my, you certainly are dishing out a lot of these.
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    Hahaha does that mean you like it?
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    That gray just screams windows 98
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    lol i just noticed
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    Try focusing on one cohesive piece that shows effort and looks good.
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    I would use a thicker font, add a small white drop shadow at a low opacity to the text to give it more of an engraved feel, get rid of the black outline on the gray box, blur the bg a little maybe
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    thanks for the crit.

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    dont really wanna open PS right now but i will try it later
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    sounds good
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    spoonforknife Retired Moderator

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    Graffiti and dull grey gradient scream consistency. Try to focus on one piece of work that has a cohesive theme. I know you're experimenting with text styles, but to be honest, your text styles are not only illegible, but don't match with the backgrounds at all.

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