[WIP] Telex

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  1. Skyone

    Skyone New Member

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    I'm working on this 2D platformer named Telex; wanted to know how it looks and if anyone had any comments on the style, etc. before I release it for sale.

    I'm thinking 100 levels should suffice, and they should be about a minute long.

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  2. UltimatePein

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    it's okay.(way better then what i could do!

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    but even if it is 2d graphics, they could be a little better. (please dont take it personally b/c i have NO idea how hard it is to make a game! lol! and also i dont mean to sound rude about the graphics it's just that i am an artist and so i gripe about stupid sh*t like that.

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    game sounds good though! ^^ (let me know if you want a few beta testers!) (hehe)

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    maybe add some enemies? (make it more mario like without getting legally involved with nintendo)
  3. River

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    Uhhhhh... why did you choose the name Telex? I saw this on the thread tree and thought you had made something that works with Western Unions' Telex system.
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    looks promising. i love platform games.
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    Telex sounds strange.
    I think what needs to be changed is the background.
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    Haha; I chose Telex based on the old storyline I decided to drop. I'm gonna work on smoothing out the graphics a bit; then adding a pixelish gradient background, maybe with some mountains. Don't know if I was to bother with too complex of enemies (there are already spikes, and springs), but it might be fun to experiment with.

    Thanks for the suggestions.

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    Gonna take my time with this (I've been working on it for a while now), so I'd say a couple weeks and it'll be out, tops.
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    What do you think of this background? (I just quicky made it

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    Here it is:

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    I will add some extras to it (the new picture will be there very soon)

    Okay here's the new picture:

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    I can always put in some more extra stuff

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