Preview [Wip] Brilho

Discussion in 'iOS Themes and Customization' started by JackT09, Jul 21, 2010.

  1. tomcooldrummer New Member

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    Voice memos is finally perfect :D calendar is sexy :D my new favourite theme
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    Oh are you going to make a videos icon? Also, I noticed the button glyphs on the calculator are off center. centre them please.
  2. JackT09 Member

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    thank you,
    and i really cant get the videos icon to look the way i want it to

    Help me i dont think that this looks right for weather but i have a block,

    I need the third heat

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  3. Baggy Spandex Active Member

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    my two cents:
    why is winterboard white? it hurts my eyes
    notes needs lines and the rip needs less drop shadow, same with the calendar rip. maybe some texture on the top binding too...
    mail envelope is huge and the inner shadow looks weird.
    the white dots look uneven on the watch, and the three blocks of color kinda do too.
    the gloss on the icons is kinda ruining the theme for me, i think it needs some blending options or to just be turned down a bit.
    it looks like theres still random pixels or something on the corners of the icons.
  4. JackT09 Member

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    Thank you
    Winterboard is slighty based on white iPhone and adidas but I can do a black one
  5. JackT09 Member

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    it hasnt changed much still looks relativly bad but i wanted to show all of my icons sorry Baggy spandex i forgot to change the notes and gloss. I would also like to say ive been finding it really hard to make icons too, i need help for ideas

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  6. Crypt Well-Known Member

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    app store- circle is choppy and should be solid, glyph is too small, off center, and the inner shadow si slightly too strong

    ipod - would be better with just the ipod in the center imo

    notes - could use some lines or a pen or text or something on the page

    calendar - the red is too bright, should be darker & more depthy (like the inner white part is)

    calculator - glyphs look off center, inner white cross is odd

    sms - eh, the layer style lacks pizazz

    calculator 2 - just looks pretty amateurish, idk. screen should be 3px or so taller, so it's centered

    winterboard - paint is flat, rectangle is off center

    credit card - looks fine.. numbers are all choppy

    clock - the white dots around it are odd

    ipod - clickwheel is too big, screen looks faded

    settings? - metal doesn't rip like that, should just be a smoorth bend, a la page curl

    contacts - font is too thin, @ should be tan or something

    base in general - corners are very choppy, gloss just fades what's behind it (try overlay+color dodge), inner stroke? on the top is too strong or big

    edit: and if i didn't mention and icon it's cos i think it's pretty decent
  7. JackT09 Member

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    so is there anything that you do like =)
  8. Crypt Well-Known Member

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    uh, safari and mail are pretty decent (albeit ordinary) and phone is nice minus the base issues

    i think gloss in general ruins themes most of the time, unless it's done very subtly and entirely on overlay/color dodge
  9. JackT09 Member

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    ok thanks for the critique and i hope you get gladhanders psd back its so good
  10. ipitouchy New Member

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    I love it, man :p