Went back to Digital for once..

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  1. stickypop

    stickypop Active Member

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    I decided I've done too much Illustrational work at the moment and needed a break so I had a bit of a mad rush and developed this over about half an hour whilst my girlfriend was (for once

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    ) kicking arse on COD4. Anyway:

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    Its no were near as good as I've done in the past, I'm sure people will agree but its not bad to try and get back into the swing of it.

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    circle on the side kills it.
    Other then that good job, is this a texture or something?
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    opaque circle on the right is killing it, the text on the bottom isn't doing any justice, contrast seems a bit too strong.

    Just my two cents, other than that: looks great.
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    Ignore the text at the bottom, it was only on for this other website but forgot to take it off when posting here.

    I agree on the circle, the more I look at it the more I think it's not right. I don't really like this piece any more, I felt more impressed when I was creating it rather than the after effect. I might add some colour to it.

    And it doesn't actually have a texture map/stock in there, its just effects and default stuff really, there are some abstract stocks which might be giving it a "textured" feel to it.
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    I actuallt really like it. Nice one.
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    Here's the edited version, will add to the original post.

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    I think it looks much better personally.
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    Yea, I like it way better without the circle. The colour does add a bit more to it. Good job.
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    NOW THAT IS A 100000000000000X BETTER!
    Nice Job!
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    Like this version the most. Smoke adds a nice touch.

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