[wallpaper]The sound that you see

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The Sound that you see


This is the original.

[This is only the start of the wallpaper and I really tried to make everything match up because as you see in the originals, stock1 and stock2, the lighting of the two pictures aren't equivalent. The man was rendered by me.

This is not the final wallpaper, this is only the start of it and I will post the absolute final when I am done with it. Please please please critique with all honesty.

Attached are the updated version(s).

The shadow is incorrect. There is no light source pointing at his face, so there shouldn't be a shadow on the wall.

Exactly what I was going to say.

Hmm. I never noticed it that way. There is a light source though, I just need to adjust the back shadow.

Thanks for the comment.

Theshadow should be there just a little more under him... Like the light was above him

The light, from what I see, is going in a south-south-east direction. I can tell because the wall on the right side (West) is mostly dark while the other wall on the right (east) is brighter. There needs to be a shadow on the wall, but as suggested above, needs to be adjusted a bit so that there still is a shadow, but not as verbose.

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As you can tell, I adjusted the back shadow. BTW, even if you go to the direct link (http://www.ifans.com/forums/imgcach...obucket.com/albums/bb266/Alalee/TheSound2.png) it sill wont show as full size, full size is 3.5 MB and about 2080x2720; stupid limitations. I will post on Deviant Art later.

the perspective is off - the image of the man was taken from lower down than the image of the alley, so he looks out of place. its especially noticeable in the chair.

Wow, a response. Thanks for the comment, however I do not know if I could fix that. If I ever finish this, (I probably wont due to lack of response) the perspective issue will not be that big of a deal.

the shadow should be no where near that wall, if anything it should be going towards the opposite direction. his legs are a bit too bright and he needs more light coming from the top

The shadow shouldn't be going in the opposite direction. As stated above, the shadow is going in a SSE direction. I will brighten the hat, though. I might just be able to find a different background