The World Without Us (Photoshop)

Discussion in 'Graphics, Design, and Photography' started by kevin1st, Mar 29, 2009.

  1. kevin1st

    kevin1st Well-Known Member

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    well i've been working on this project or about 4 days now and i like it. so i post it here for any comments and criticism.

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    Nice one. Keep up the work.

    Did you make that tree? It looks pro.
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    kevin1st Well-Known Member

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    kinda. its a frame of a tree that i made w/ the pen tool and just applied some heavily erased splatter brushes that i found somewhere to imitate leaves.
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    you did the whole tree with the pen tool? that must have taken a long time!

    anyway, it looks good, but something seems off. maybe its the dark silhouettes of the buildings and tree vs the realistic grass and apple, kinda seems unbalanced. but its neat nonetheless.
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    It's okay, I think the sky needs more skyish looks
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    the sky is to blue
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    Yea, i agree.
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    i tries to fix the sky a little.

    and for all those who question about the tree. i traced this tree Here to some extent then uses some splatter brushes on the frame
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    Put some clouds in the sky and make some smoke go higher up.

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    i LOVE the grass, sky needs some clouds, stock clouds overlayed maybe? apple is very out of place. and i like the tree but in that setting it's very unbalanced, a silhouette tree will not fit, sorry. also maybe lose the three 'lines' of fog coming from the tower and just have the fog, but make it a little smaller and more distant, possibly blur it a little. one last thing, i think the city would look better if it were curved, just a tad.

    sorry to be so harsh, commenting on everything, i tend to do that, but it does look good, just trying to help with my criticism.

    HOW did you do the grass, i'm jealous! lol

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