The One Shirt Project (Revisited)

Discussion in 'Graphics, Design, and Photography' started by ClassicFan, May 13, 2009.

  1. ClassicFan

    ClassicFan New Member

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    Hey everybody! A while back I attempted this same project, but it failed due to the bad design and my lack of money. It's back! I'm redoing everything, including the logo and the designs of course. This time it's not just for Africa, it's aimed at bringing clean water to the whole world. Below is just the new logo sans the slogan "Give Earth clean water,".

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    Please comment! I will have designs up in the following weeks.
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    Typeface looks good, clean and clear. The tap doesn't look good, I'd take it off, like idea though, would look better on the letter "r" in project tbh.
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    Thanks! I'll try that and see how it looks on the "r".
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    I agree with Sp1d3r on moving the tap to the "r". Also, I can read the "j" in project just fine but it really sticks out with no curve on the bottom. Even the slightest of curves on the bottom to make it a "j" would be good. Otherwise, great project. As you know I had been following the other project. I think you should keep a simple design and not get too big of a design either. Nice revisions so far!
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    Thanks for the suggestions guys! Does this look any better?

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