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Discussion in 'Graphics, Design, and Photography' started by lewyboi9493, Mar 24, 2009.

  1. lewyboi9493

    lewyboi9493 Member

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    because this piece was inspired by one of yours.

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    im looking for comments from anybody though.
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    fear_2670 Banned

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    Looks nice, but the reflection is too straight, might want to fix that.
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    lewyboi9493 Member

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    yeah i just noticed that thanks to you.
    thanks

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    fear_2670 Banned

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    Will you fix it?
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    ryanlusk Banned

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    Also on the second image , the phone is blurry.
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    fear_2670 Banned

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    He's just zooming in.
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    Oh.

    Haha.
    Silly me.
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    stickypop Active Member

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    Looks good, needs more background going on, you need like something just slight in the back like a pattern or something.

    To stop the "zoomed" image looking blurry, start off on a big canvas, I usually work A3 on pieces now, you can get more detail in and it looks better when printed.

    But yeah, nice job, the colours look good together too.
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    maybe add a cloud layer to the background, really faint (maybe overlay over the black that is already there). that would make it less plain, and would make the glow less basic, give it more definition.

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