Slurpee iCon tutorial

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  1. taptaptouch

    taptaptouch Active Member

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    I have been trying to make this

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    I'm pleased with what I've gotten so far but any suggestions are welcome

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  2. GrooveMachine

    GrooveMachine Active Member

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    That's not too bad, actually. Move the hole in the top to the center, and use the Burn and Doge tools to add some depth to the drink. Also, your inner glow on the cup is a bit too strong, and the stripes should be transformed to show more perspective. Your color reproduction is nice, though.

    Edit: also, the lid needs some glossy reflections.

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  3. Pablojrz

    Pablojrz New Member

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    The lines need to be slanted in on the sides
  4. taptaptouch

    taptaptouch Active Member

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    Ok heres another "update" to it, I find I actually like the placement of the holes, added some shadows and better highlights to the drink, added a straw, did some perspective to the lines, tried my best at making the straw look like its in the drink.

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    jmwerkus Active Member

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    urs is actually very good
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    I think the edges of the stripes could be cleaner.

    Nice work from scratch though!
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    Yeah I think Ill redo the stripes, Ive distorted them to many times
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    I like it!

    Maybe you could bring the clear cap inside the white cup edge a little, more like the other one.

    And round off the bottom of the cup a little so it's not so square.

    But yes, otherwise, your colours looks really good! And the slurpee looks almost good enough to drink! Yum!
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    taptaptouch Active Member

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    Ok rounding up
    Does anyone know where i can find the slurpee logo from the one, the closest i could find is this

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    Looks a little outdated Imo
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    GrooveMachine Active Member

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    I'm pretty sure Jonas Rask rebuilt the logo when he made it--it's clearly not a copy-job.

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