Requesting your critiques!

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  1. hotfuzz

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    Hey guys,

    I made this website awhile ago for my uncles mate who drag races and have just finished making some touch ups.

    To be honest i think i could do better, but i think it does the job and for the amount i got payed for it, it is very very good as i didnt get bugger all for it.

    Here it is:

    www.ghtracing.com.au

    So wadda ya think.. what can be improved?
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    First impression's very nice. Good show! Just noticed "where if go any " in the introduction... I think that misses a "we"....Also, the myspace & twitter icons look a little dull...
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    Oh sweet thanks! any suggestions on what to do to the myspace and twitter icons then?

    Also any one elses opinion?
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    The text is not very clear on the myspace icon. Looks a bit washed out. The twitter icon is slightly better. Also, retaining the primary colour theme on the icons - red, brown etc would help. Anyhow, those are just cosmetic suggestions & purely my opinion. Once again, great job there!
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    Yeh, i had the same thoughts believe it or not :L.. just don't have the skill and/or will to create good looking icons. Thanks for your input though, much appreciated

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    i will eventually get around to doing those icons as they have to be done lol.

    Also i'm surprised you didn't pick up that it says in the intro "be sure to check out the kind and generous companies that sponsor us and supply us with what we need" yet they aren't actually listed anywhere on the site lol. Still waiting for the list of them grrr...

    Once again though, thanks very much for your input.. much appreciated.
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    Aah, i did indeed miss that

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    . Also LOL on "kind and generous"

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    Once again, anyone else?
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    Can anyone else give me some pointers?

    Please?
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    Do you have some sort of deadline before the site goes live? Hope you get more feedback!!!
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    The website is already live!
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    I mean are the end users/viewers aware of it being live?
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    Ok, from your silence I presume it has been advertised to users already

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