PocketPC ad/ wallpaper

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  1. JohnnyAndroid

    JohnnyAndroid Active Member

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    Tell me if you like it or if there is anything that needs to be changed or disregarded. Let's try to keep it mature please

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    Nice, looks great. My only suggestion is to make it a little less obvious that you used the cloud filter (Maybe lower the opacity of that a bit). Also, for non-smooth metal surfaces, adding 2-2.5% Gaussian (monochromatic) noise works wonders. Actually one more thing--the gradient over the screen is a bit intense (or maybe it's an inner shadow, I can't tell). Maybe lighten that up a bit, and you should be good to go. It still looks great as it is, though. Nice job.

    Also, how long have you been using Photoshop?

    Edit: Actually, just noticed this: what are the white bars on the left and right side of the device? Is that like uncut from a Google Images result or something? Haha

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    Thanks I'll fix it up tomorrow.
    I'd say about 2 years tops.
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    GrooveMachine Active Member

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    Ah, cool. I've only been using it for about 6 months, but have used it a TON since then, so I'm starting to get alright at it. Looking forward to the update

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    I'll make sure I'm on it tomorrow. Oh, btw it's not totally finished yet, I've still got some more stuff to do to it.

    Thanks for the professional and mature critique.

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    Haha, no problem. I know how it feels to have someone say "that's stupid", or some other crap like that. Not that anyone would EVER say that about my Photoshop work

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    Lol, yeah you must be good. You got any of your work I could look at??
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    Looks good to me, not sure on the Render>Clouds but looks good I think.

    I did something ages ago similar to this

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    I can do a lot better now, but try adding some more detail to it like that ^ just around it a bit, changing opacity etc to different layered objects.

    Otherwise, pretty cool :]
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    You spelled evolved wrong you spelled it like evovled.
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    Thanks, did you use brushes from other designers or did you make them yourself? Oh, I will add more, I wasn't completely finished. Just wanted to get some feedback before I did.

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    @iPTF Thanks, I'll make sure I fix it.

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