New Graphic, need feedback!

Discussion in 'Graphics, Design, and Photography' started by fckinfamous, Dec 25, 2008.

  1. fckinfamous

    fckinfamous Well-Known Member

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    ^^^^^^^^^^
    NEW ONE.its suppose to be a poster, started off small first.
  2. joorowned

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    Look nice, love the dome looking bubble in the background.
  3. Gamma

    Gamma Active Member

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    nice

    i think the bird is in a weird position tho
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    fckinfamous Well-Known Member

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    Thanks for the feedback, anyone else?
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    Teslanaut Well-Known Member

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    Did you do that entire picture? Please be Honest.
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    remove the bird
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    lol I think thats the moon
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    kevin1st Well-Known Member

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    im gonna say no. i bet he just added the text and maybe that bubble. oh ya and the lens flare
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    fckinfamous Well-Known Member

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    added everything there except for the boat, and the grass...that was a stock image.
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    T0MM3H New Member

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    I like it. The choice of stock is really good. The effects you've used have been executed well. I like the text, and I think the low opacity glow/stroke looks nice, although 'Be Free' needs to be repositioned - maybe above the word 'Life'. The colouring is nice, as is the blending. However, I think the random render of the bird looks out-of-place, and I would get rid of it. Overall, good work.

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