Need Feedback on "Dream Big"

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  1. Totally 1337

    Totally 1337 Active Member

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    Some of my most recent photoshop work. I can't decide if I'm dont yet or not.

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  2. itouchnathan

    itouchnathan New Member

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    Looks like the guy is retarded, but hey that might just be me.
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    the fire looks really fake compared to the rest of the landscape... but its a good start...
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    The meteors falling look like there in the front, but there at the back. Maybe my eye's are just weird.
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    GrooveMachine Active Member

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    Not too bad, that's a really cool picture. The font should blend a little more, though, and follow the perspective changes of the wall it's on. I used to have a link to a tutorial that would be perfect for you, but I can't find it anymore. Also, what's that lava stuff?
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    Aprosamurai Active Member

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    Dude you're the guy in the picture lol? Way to insult yourself.

    On a serious note though I like it I couldn't do better If I wanted to so yeah I dig it.

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    Yeah, besides that it's really cool.
  9. Totally 1337

    Totally 1337 Active Member

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    Ok from all your responses its obvious I'm not done.

    Thanks!

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    It looks okay. But, yeah the flames are weird. Btw, where was that picture taken?

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