I was asked in my Expository Writing class at my high school to compose an Argumentative essay. So the topic I came up with was how Apple wants to make jailbreaking illegal. Hopefully you find my essay informative. One of the quotes I used was even from the iPodTouchFans website where I talk about the Cydia Store, and yes you moderators I did use parenthetical citations to show that it was from you guys Please Register or Log in to view images. LOL, my teacher read my draft and said he had no idea what I was talking about, im just like I know my essay is to technical for you, so will that make my grade lower. He just said that it was good I am targeting my audience and he will have to read up on the issue. Attached to the post is the essay for anyone that wants to look at it. Its 5 pages long so I figured I would not copy and paste it in here.