My graphic works

Discussion in 'Graphics, Design, and Photography' started by iWill, Mar 12, 2012.

  1. iWill Active Member

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    It's not that I don't want criticism... He just could have used other words than "cheap looking" and "half assed". That's all I'm asking for. And my work here sure is drafts of works that will go in my portfolio. Drafts.
  2. bigjzoo Banned

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    You can't expect everyone to sugarcoat it. He by no means said to just give up graphic design all together. Constructive criticism can be found in many different forms.
  3. J-Phone Active Member

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    You took the words right out of my mouth.

    Still imo, the first few of your works were amazing, think about the time and detail you put into those and compare it to the stuff you do now.
  4. iWill Active Member

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    Ok I followed y'all's advice and took my time to make those.

    A sky rendering from scratch
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    A thin drape over the earth representing the ozone layer from scratch
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    A picture of a sunset all made from scratch
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    And for The Hunger Games fans here is a Capitol wallpaper
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  5. samw40 Well-Known Member

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    Can you tell me what textures and/or brushes you used for the "At Least We Survived" picture? That one looks really awesome.
  6. iWill Active Member

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    It's just a two-sided gradient and some blending mode. I think it was reflect or overlay... I can't remember because it's so old!
  7. samw40 Well-Known Member

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    Oh ok.
  8. Joe Rossignol Community Manager

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    You're off to a good start... looking forward to you posting more.
  9. iWill Active Member

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    Ok, I've completely redone the WIR banners. Hope you'll like them! (Click to make them bigger)

    I think the first is the most boring one...
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    But I love how the second turned out!
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  10. samw40 Well-Known Member

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    Lol, I like the first one better actually. Try removing the faded edges on the 2nd one and replace it with a dark grey gradient, kind of like the color of the Apple.