Memories From The Past (a Song i made)

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  1. WilliamBauset

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    The beginning is nice, but it just doesn't build anywhere.

    Not sure what you made that in, but I'd say to increase the tempo in the middle somewhere, and possibly add some drums.

    That's just me, though. I've gotta say, the beginning was pretty cool.
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    Wow. Just wow. But at that one point that it starts going a bit technic-e you should make it bouce off right there into a fast-paced techno cover over the original instruments. But just really awesome.

    Argh! Somewhat ninja'd by JKK, but that is basically what I'm saying.
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    Very nice. But as JKK said, it doesn't buikd anywhere.
    But good job tho!

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