iPoTH4CK3R To-Do List, FEEDBACK Please!

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  1. iPoTH4CK3R

    iPoTH4CK3R Member

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    The best thing I've made so far. Only thing I didn't draw is the fancy doodle. Credit for that is from here. Don't know whether that guy made it or not, but that where I got it. Everything else is all me.

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    After feedback, version 2. Removed Post-it writing, and fixed doodle color.

    Let me know what you guys think! Thanks!
  2. Germany

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    This is awesome! You must have spent hours on this. I really like how everything looks so realistic and how you combined it just about perfectly. One small fix: the OMG i PWN! should be moved over on the sticky notes. It is right on the edge and just doesn't look right. Everything else looks great, nice work!
  3. micaheljcaboose

    micaheljcaboose Well-Known Member

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    I like number 6 xD
  4. Totally 1337

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    haha nice one! but the weird bunny (?) thing at the botton doenst look very "hand-drawn"

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    Yeah, I didn't realize that it was a lot darker than the rest. He can easily curve the colors on that though. Make it a similar tint of the pencil color. It would fit in a lot better then.
  6. Joe Rossignol

    Joe Rossignol Community Manager Staff Member

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    Looks really realistic, aside from that wierd rabbit-looking thing that you credited the other person for. And TouchPwn's right, you might want to consider moving over the text on the sticky note because it's overlapping the edge almost. Other than that, really nice job! Keep up the good work.
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    Nice, very creative. One thing you could change though; the black thing in the bottom left could use a lower opacity or a dark grey. It stands out a lot compared to the letters and other stuff.

    Overall it looks pretty cool though.

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  8. iPoTH4CK3R

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    Ya, the post-it note was the only thing sketchy about it.

    I wasn't sure I liked it after i did it, I'll probably remove that eventually.

    And yes, it took quite a while, especially considering this is only about my 6th thing editing.

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    Please work on getting #7 done as fast as possible.

    Very nicely done btw.
  10. Totally 1337

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    And i would also add some type of filter, to make it messier.

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