I just started making music...check it out :D

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  1. SLLhotD

    SLLhotD Member

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    Wassup everyone,
    I just started making music... i'm pretty excited
    u guys should check it out
    myspace.com/dncsmurf
    I appreciate criticism
    but please don't be assholes for no reason
    and btw i rap, so if you don't like rap, don't look cuz your just gonna dis me cuz u like what u like and it isnt rap.

    thnx

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    if u do like it, plz tell people about it so i can get around

    thnx
  2. SmexyPenguin18

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    Not trying to be an asshole but

    meh...
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    if u dont like it tell me how 2 improve
    i wanna get better
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    got 15 seconds into the first songs. You don't know rap. What rapper raps about getting married????
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    The MySpace alone validates your musical ability. The whole "Swagga" thing is done for, and based on the beats, I'm under the impression that you guys are trying to desperately be ringtone rappers.


    You guys need to re-invent your image first, and then try and have your own style, instead of trying to be like New Boyz.
  6. SLLhotD

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    i aint tryna be a ringtone rapper
    im makein sum lyrical stuff
    @bigdaveyj i said "I hear its a b*tch but i want the good life, u know imma put a ring on it and make it my wife"
    i aint takin about no girl - im takin abt d good life
    also chek out life iz unfair dat is a lyrical song
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    Life Iz Unfair (at least to me) sounds like a bad attempt at an Eminem-style production, mixed in with lame-ass singing/Auto-tuning.

    Please, get your own style. That's why 90% of Amateur rappers don't make it.
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    man i dont like dat jerkin sh*t
    and dat soulja boy sh*t
    and gucci mayn bull crap
    im different
    im makin lyrical stuff - but lotsa ppl in my school like hyphy stuff
    so im makin lyrical stuff and other stuff
    imma make more lyrical stuff
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    @Cam
    idk wat u mean by lame ass eminem style
    but yo u gotta admit its lyrical it speaks to people
    and the autotune aint me its my friend but i love that autotune hook
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    It's not different, or lyrical. Seriously. Every rapper wants to get in on the "I have feelings, and all I want to do is live the good life".

    And no, it's not "Lyrical". Also, Auto Tuning is unanimously hated among rap enthusiasts by right now's standards.
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    ayt tnx
    but i think life iz unfair has some purpose
    but ill be making more songs - with meaning
    den ill show u ayt?
    hope u like some of the new stuff i do

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