First Attempt at Stock Images

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  1. JohnnyAndroid

    JohnnyAndroid Active Member

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    Here it is. Tell me what you think. I'm not looking for Oh emm Gee that's awesome either. Give me some constructive criticism and don't just say you don't like it give me some reasons!

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  2. mieraisamazing

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    that looks really nice! except im not sure about the location of the Be. it seems a little off
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    Thanks! I didn't want everything to be centered. I'm thinking of taking out the inner shadow on the adidas logo also.
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    why? lol the adidas logo looks really nice! i like it! i think it fits in nicely with the whole image!
    and the adidas font might need a teeny bit of spacing. this is probably just me being picky lol.
    and also, the soccer ball should be rounded. it looks like funky lump lol.
    again, i am a picky person lol.

    but overall, with a few finishing touches here and there, you have yourself a winning image!
    nice job!
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    It seems really beginner. LOL Thanks. Yeah it does need some spacing.

    Lol, I said the same thing about the ball and the guys fingers are kind of cut off too.

    Yeah, thanks for the comments!!
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    mieraisamazing Banned

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    HAHAHAH i just noticed the dudes fingers lol.
    and this isn't really beginner. you just didn't have enough time

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    glad to have helped! can't wait to see the final product!
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    Excellent! I can't wait to see it either!

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    Alrighty, constructive criticism =D

    The font...is kinda ugly. Too basic maybe. It looks alright at the bottom but Adidas at the top doesnt really.

    Dont like the way Adidas is at the top, where its half on white, half on black. With that font anyway.

    Where the Be is doesnt make sense really compared to where the Original is.

    Not really a need for the inner shadow on the logo as you said. Embossed down might look ok, but then might look out of place as nothing else is.

    Errr yeah....constructive? I hope so. I dont mean to be nasty ='(

    Oh and theres a thin black line at the top of the white.
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    What! The font is ugly?!?! Dude do you know what font that is?? Could you suggest another font maybe?

    Haha I knew the inner shadow was a bad idea. What do you mean by:
    Oh yeah it was good. Thanks for the criticisms!! Naw you're not. In the Graphics Design world not everything is OMG fantastic!

    Yeah, I seen that line too. Fill Fail!
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    I think the original should be right after be but other than that it is really good!

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