Fear's Graffiti - Comment And Suggest

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  1. fear_2670

    fear_2670 Banned

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    I have created this graffiti text from scratch, no tutorials used at all.
    As i see it, it doesn't have the "graffiti" feel, i know there's something missing.
    I want you guys to help me find what's missing to finish this off, so go ahead and suggest, if i like it i'll put it on my project.
    Also comment on what i've got so far.

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  2. Baker5

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    it to me seems like the rays from the center need some color and not gray but other than that i like it
  3. fear_2670

    fear_2670 Banned

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    Colors are fine, i was thinking something like to add on, not change or remove.
  4. ryanlusk

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    It honestly looks like you just took a random background.
    And then took random grafitti text.
    And wrote Cesar.
    Nothing special at all.
  5. Joe Rossignol

    Joe Rossignol Community Manager Staff Member

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    But he said he made it from scratch ryanlusk.
  6. ryanlusk

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    I know , but still.
    I just don't get why you would spend all that time , when it would take about ten seconds otherwise.
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    Teslanaut Well-Known Member

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    Exactly.
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    Give me some color, needs more detail also
  9. ryanlusk

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    Exactly what I was thinking.
    But wasn't bold enough to try it with a mod in the house

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    There are just too many grafitti fonts on dafont for me to me convinced.
    Screenshot the psd fear.
  10. Germany

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    Put arrows in it. It is very common in graffiti and it looks great. They often go out of the first and last letters, but you can go wildstyle and put them wherever you want.

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