Critique Please

Discussion in 'Graphics, Design, and Photography' started by extremocracy, Jul 21, 2009.

  1. extremocracy

    extremocracy Banned

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    Here is something I made in my spare time. Kinda a motivational picture... but I dunno.

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    Axis Super Moderator Staff Member

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    I like it; perhaps change the angle of the angel shadow a bit more "straight up". Also, "Imagine Free" doesn't sound that good. Maybe something with fewer syllables, like "Think Free".

    EDIT: if you care the slightest bit at all about proper grammar (which I'm not saying you should necessarily), "free" cannot modify a verb. you must go with "freely".
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    Ok I'll look into doing that.

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