Critique Mah Wurk!

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  1. Ipwnnubletz

    Ipwnnubletz Banned

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    I started Illustrator around September of last year, and I suck. Could you guys comment on this? It was supposed to be for a 2009 Calendar project, the month of May.

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    I like it, but then again, I don't understand Japanese...wait....Chinese?
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    Teslanaut Well-Known Member

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    It actually means the same thing in both languages.
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    KevN Member

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    Oh...interesting...

    And while I'm at it, I curse the California Schooling District for making the only languages French and Spanish. I wish I could learn Mandrin

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  5. Ipwnnubletz

    Ipwnnubletz Banned

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    Thanks. Moar plz? I need constructive criticism.
  6. Meikura

    Meikura Super Moderator Staff Member

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    Haha wow, your kanji are awful

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    tidy them up!

    EDIT: More fitting for may would be 五月
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  8. Aurongel

    Aurongel Banned

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    No, no you don't

    trust me, you don't
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    thechungster Super Moderator Emeritus

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    How come? I'm learning Mandarin, as well as Cantonese and to top it off, some French. It's kinda simple once you watch some Chinese TV and listen to some music to get used to it. And use 五月 as Meik said. Japanese and Chinese are so similar sometimes.
  10. Aurongel

    Aurongel Banned

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    I get enough Chinese in my upper class American life thanks to my weeaboo friends...

    I love em', but by god, if I have to sit through another Gackt song...!

    (Also, how's it going Chungster? Been a while good buddy)

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