Circular Slaughter

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  1. David.

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    This is the cover to my upcoming demo cd called Circular Slaughter. All credit for creation goes to ChrisL.

    Opinions?
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    It looks great! My only thoughts were that i don't particularly like the way the 'circular slaughter' text is done, i much prefer the way the 'rebel' text is done, unless they're the same and I'm hallucinating... :/
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    Hrm, I love the way the text is like that lol. Makes it seem flowing yet sharp.
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    the beveling on the text/lines looks real amateurish, the font doesn't fit, the bullet holes & blood look obviously fake, and the cd cracks are super pixelly

    but it ain't bad

    edit: also what's going on in the middle of the cd? the cracks extend onto the background or there's a circle missing or something
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    Lol Crypt, I wasn't looking for the best of the best here, but this fits what "I was looking for. Just a CD that is cracked and shot lol.

    And its like it was busted I guess lol.
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    well sure, i'm just giving critique like i do

    if it's good enough for you that's great
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    Yea haha, my rap demo doesn't need professional work. Not yet..

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    It would probably look better with a higher resolution image of a CD...
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    See Jug...i'm like Crypt. You ask my opinion and I point out everything that's not perfect, and there's a lot. Of course this is all imo, but I'll try and be nice.

    The cracks in the CD are really pixely, gunshots look really fake lol, but that doesn't really matter cuz it's just a demo like you said.

    The font for "circular slaughter" is too cartoony, I think something more aggressive would fit better with the cracked, shot, bloody CD.

    Also, I don't like the background, personal preference it ain't my style.

    So that's my opinion.
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    Thanks lol.

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