Chocolate Indulgances

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  1. The7thWitness

    The7thWitness New Member

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    Drag to new tab to view in full. It looks scrunched here.
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    Sitruss New Member

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    Your gradient has color rings. Try using 16-bit color depth. I am going to be rather blunt and say that this is overly simplistic.
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    I agree with the above. Just a bit too simplistic for my taste. Also (I assume your intention for this is a wallpaper?) the words take up too much space imo. What's up with all the KiD CuDi quotes? I actually gave that album a listen from start to finish today for the first time and it's a great album.
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    The7thWitness New Member

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    Thanks for the crits i appreciate it more then people lying about it. Yeah i actually forgot where the quote was from until i read your post. Cudi's tight though.
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    i Hate chocolate. 'cept for Nesquik.
    Nonetheless too dark. Though a great lil poem.
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    The7thWitness New Member

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    too dark what.
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    Meikura Super Moderator Staff Member

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    Don't tell me the sky's the limit when there's footprints on the moon.

    Note the apostrophes...
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    not to mention it should be there ARE footprints
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    spoonforknife Retired Moderator

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    Ergh. Indulgences has an e. Your typeface is also borderline illegible.
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    +1. I think you need to lower the opacity of the highlight on the text.

    Also, what does the style have to do with the quote? The two themes don't seem to go well together.

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