Can I have an opinion please?

Discussion in 'Graphics, Design, and Photography' started by Abcmsaj, Jun 4, 2008.

  1. Abcmsaj

    Abcmsaj Retired Moderator

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    I've just started Photoshopping properly, and I just wondered what you experts thought and if you have tips to help me? Maybe you started with a website that you think I could benefit from, or you know some special help videos?

    Here's what I've done over this week:

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    Banner.

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    Pool Ball.

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    My First iPod Touch. Dodgy Home Button... Lol

    I reckon the images will get shrunk.
    So I've stuck the big link underneath them too.
    Thanks for your help

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    Alex.
  2. Blake

    Blake Super Moderator Emeritus

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    I can't photoshop to save my life, but those look good!
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    Chucky102 Well-Known Member

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    I'm to start by judging the images.
    1st. Image= Decent, nothing great, needs more work on it and more round chips.
    2nd Image= WAY too many shadow underneath the ball, and the bottom "Shadow" the light green one should be darker.
    3rd Image= No Comments

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    Overall, you did good. But you're on the Graphic Design section, so expect harsh, yet constructive criticism.

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  4. Abcmsaj

    Abcmsaj Retired Moderator

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    I don't mind either.
    I'm not expecting someone to say "Are u Pikass0?"

    Thanks for your comments =D
    I agree with the ball one - I tried to burn the side opposite the light source but it just looked silly.

    And thnak you too Blake.
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    stickypop Active Member

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    Aye, way too much Shadow on the ball. Over all, not bad since you seem to be new to photoshop.

    If you do get any harsh crit on here about your work, try going to a design studio, i'm at one now for work experience and they've offered me summer work too but seriously, they do know what they are talking about, crit of here is nothing compared

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    My opinion is that they are too plain
  7. berky93

    berky93 New Member

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    they look good:

    first one: looks good, poker chips need a little work on roundness. also, it looks odd that their shadown randomly stick off the side - maybe give them a closer shadow?

    second: looks good, ball it too bright and theres too much shadow. also, if you think about perpective, there must be a really tiny light shining on that thing for such large shadow spread - make the shadow more confined a little

    third: great job, home button need a little work. also, if youre asking about the gta thing too, the reflection looks kinda plain - instead of just a clear white oval, give it a slight white-transparent gradient, but end the transparency way off the reflection so it just looks like a gentle curve of reflection

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