Avatar help and respone

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  1. epqr

    epqr Member

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    hi, i'm making my first avatar and i need some feedback on it, and how i can imnprove it

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    please come with ideas and tell me what you think of it. i don't expect it to be super awsome, cuse its my first avatar ever

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    NICE...add some dept...example-mines

    edit: the glow kills the whole avatar, and maybe use a gradient.
  3. epqr

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    just an small update.

    you think that the "glowing line" doesnt fit?

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    Looks a little better.
    Try making the leave white...
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    Joe Rossignol Community Manager Staff Member

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    This second avatar has a better gradient flow than the previous. In the first avatar, it suddenly goes from dark yellow to a brighter shade of yellow, this one flows from one to another much better.

    I would suggest two things:

    A) Use a brighter shade of blue for the background of the avatar.
    B) There's a little clean up around the edges that needs to be done.
  6. epqr

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    i tried to make the leave withe, but i didn't like it.i could try to make a little different white color or gardient or something.

    also i tried to make the golden one a little more smooth around the edges(don't know of it helped so much

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    ) and i used a birgther shade of blue

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    I like the white one...You see the white one on my avatar?
    The glow kills the avatar. Maybe try not to use it too much.
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    Yeah but the one in your avatar looks like a tousand times better

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    ok so i made three new one: 1. withe with a little tiny bit green in it 2. plain white 3.Gold
    alle these are without glow on the leaf, but i kept on the line, cuse i really liked that, and the line looks stupid without any effects.

    edit: the green one migth had a little too much breen but i kinda liked not plain white, cuse tahyt fit more with the blue backround. i migth use an other effect or put less glow in it..?

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    I'm liking the golden one, the white ones just need a darker background color or something. good job!
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    thanks man

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    and thanks for your help.

    i made an other one with green and gold/orange backround

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    , but i think i'll stick with the blue one. still i kinda liked the green one

    any more finshing you think i should do?

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