Preview 1st theme

Discussion in 'iOS Themes and Customization' started by Octizzle, Oct 11, 2009.

  1. Octizzle

    Octizzle Member

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    this i hope will be the start of my first iphone theme
    its inspired by these comics i made in 4th grade and since i coulnd'nt (and still cant) draw it was just a head with feet
    and i think that might make out to be a cute theme with stuff like crazybots, picnic, melons, aliens etc...
    please constructive critisism because ive never really
    made anything from scratch in photoshop before so i would really appreciate helpful pointers and hints

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    so heres the concept
    prob wont do anything else tonight but ill try and stay on top of this
    please be honest
    i dont want to waste my time if you guys dont think it will be worth it

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  2. jmwerkus

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    Has some potential, if u can make them all great. No offense but it's really not the best concept though.
  3. Octizzle

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    ill try and give it some better colors and shapes i just put this up in 2 min
    do you have any suggestions?
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    In my opinion neon colors would be cool but that's just me
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    looks like it was made by a 4thgrader.

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    i like where this is going. but as mentioned.. the color is terrible lol. change it up!
    some birght colors maybe

    it does have potential to be up there with melon and aliens and picnic, but it needs a lot of work.
  7. Octizzle

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    thanks guys
    ive decided to keep going with this and work on it whenever i have free time
  8. Baggy Spandex

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    You need to add some shading and drop shadow to that little guy. add a slight gradient also. He needs depth. Good concept, Stick with it. Also, vipfreak is right, learn to use the pen tool. It's probably the most valuable thing you'll learn in photoshop, so before you get comfortable without it, get comfortable with it.
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    wow
    thank you that was extremely helpful
    i always wondered what the pen tool was
  10. Jess2012

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    I think it was mentioned above, but try using a less muddy yellow. Give it a gradient instead. Maybe something like this?

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